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Chapter two: Werewolf’s curse.











After seeing Lily and the man walking away in the distance, my surroundings transformed back to where I originally was. The cat was resting on my leg again, purring peacefully. I scratched her head and then she stood up and looked at me.





“Did you find anything important?” She asked. “Like you name?”





“I think so,” I answered. “Is this name Lily Rosewood?”





“Yes it is,” replied the cat delightedly, “That little girl you seen in that memory, she was you! You were so cute, but please don’t tell anyone. I’m not supposed to peek in someone’s memory without permission.”





“Um, okay”





All of a sudden, there was a loud, yet recognizable scream. I stood up and looked around the forest with alertness.





“You don’t have to look around so much.” Said the cat, “Do you remember what this man in your memory said about you possessing great ability?”





“He said something about that, yes,” I said, trying to wonder what the cat was trying to say, “Why?”





“Do you want to know what that ability is?”





“Yes I do”





“Close your eyes, and remain calm”





I did what the cat told me. Staying calm seemed so easy. My environment appeared in black with a blue outline. I looked around the forest until I saw two moving living beings which were blue in color, one of them seem to be a girl fleeing from the other being that I could not identify. I knew the one being pursued was Aiyana, but she is so far-off. I opened my eyes and looked down at the cat.





“That girl, do you know her?” asked the cat, “She must be in trouble, let’s go help her. There’s something else that I want to show you.”





The cat ran ahead through the bushes and I soon followed without hesitation. Not running for very long, I began to notice of a cluster of trees just up ahead.





“I think we should jump across those trees” insinuated the cat, “That way we should get to the girl much more quickly. See that tree over there? On the count of three, we’ll jump on that big branch. And keep your eyes closed so you can pinpoint this girl’s location. Ready, One…..Two……..THREE”





I sprung forward and ascended and perched upon a large solid branch. I felt something land on my right shoulder. I turned and saw the cat, who looked back at me.





“Don’t worry about me,” she said, “you should be focusing on helping your friend. Now let’s keep going, and keep your eyes closed and focus. You can still see where you’re going.”





I closed my eyes again, and heard panting. It sounded like it was coming from every direction, making it difficult to follow the sounds. The two blue images returned to my mind, heading in my direction. I leaped forward to the nearest tree branch, and kept going until I brought myself to the ground. I watched them patiently.





“Pretty smart getting ahead of them,” said the cat, impressed “Now to show you what I promised. Are you left handed or right handed?”





“Do you expect me to know that?” I snapped.





“Okay never mind then, as I recall, I think you are right handed, right? Yes you are definitely. Sorry, forgot. Reach out your right hand and focus your energy through your fingers.”





I extended my right arm forward. Looking at it, I envisioned some sort of electrical surge emitting through my fingers. Immediately there appeared a swirl of blue light which formed into a blue ball. The ball of light grew larger and brighter which each passing second. I could hear the two figures approaching, so closing my eyes to see their outlines wasn’t really necessary. My eyes widened to see the first one running out in the open to be Aiyana, followed by some grotesque looking creature chasing her. She looked at me with a gaping mouth.





“Get down Aiyana!” I barked.





Aiyana jumped forward, landing in the dirt on her stomach. The creature came at us with its feral hostility. For some reason, it stopped running. The creature was huge and muscular standing on two legs. Blood and drool dripped from his canine-like face. Yellow stained his teeth and his claws were not only sharp but also filthy. I aimed the ball of light at the creature, shaking violently as I looked into his golden eyes. The creature gave a deafening roar, then he swiftly moved toward me with ferocity.

I'm so happy I wrote this story. Read it and Love it. Please comment on it. It's not that long.?
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Reply:ehh, I'm not one for short stories but it made me think of Allen Poe


8/10
Reply:I like it. It's descriptive and paints a picture. 8/10. Just make sure to put punctuation when you close your quote, e.g., "Um, okay." , "Yes, I do."





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